tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10189005.post112955319175368903..comments2023-09-21T17:22:58.661+05:30Comments on manishalakhe: Complaintmanisha lakhehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01788008662800072316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10189005.post-1129621385326923522005-10-18T13:13:00.000+05:302005-10-18T13:13:00.000+05:30Manisha--wonderful in the mix of emotion and imagi...Manisha--<BR/>wonderful in the mix of emotion and imagination, discipline and freedom.<BR/>This seems to me among the best of your poems that I've read.<BR/><BR/>> the spilt grains of sweetness<BR/>> melt in my tears.<BR/>seems the start of an "internalising" that keeps going.<BR/><BR/>I salute the strength of your poem, which takes imagination seriously, as such poetry should.<BR/><BR/>cheers, d.i.david raphael israelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16621521896693000470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10189005.post-1129571105027805202005-10-17T23:15:00.000+05:302005-10-17T23:15:00.000+05:30Woh tees nahi jaagi dil mein, kuch adhoora reh gay...Woh tees nahi jaagi dil mein, kuch adhoora reh gaya; did u run scared of revealing yourself too much? It doesn't wring me like brb does. <BR/><BR/>Or maybe I am not ready for it. I am being obtuse once again.Asmitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09451561695483962791noreply@blogger.com